oh good , i thought you weere starting off with the main sotry right away , in this case , this is a great prologue

cant wait to hear the story and maybe when you start the story , have a different main character instead of the soul reaper guy , and eventually throughout the books your maincharacter crosses paths with the soul reaper dude, and they become mortal enemies , maybe then near the center of the story , your main character will gets cut by the dark blade of the soul reaper , and then he is tainted by evil but doesnt know it , then when he saves the princess , the evil that has tainted him , possess' him and he kills the princess , then who goes on a rampage killing everyone and everything in site , then the soul reaper puts a stop to things and kills the main character , soul reaper dude then becomes the hero
